Chapter 1 — Page 18 "If I hear..."

PANEL Same/similar panel. We should get the feeling that Shenya is stressed / overstimulated. This last shout from Sarya is the last straw. SARYA (off-panel) Mommm! PANEL Evil panel of Shenya. She's finally cracked. SHENYA I have been __quite__ patient. (new) I have allowed not one but __two__ snacks. (new) I have told __three__ bedtime legends. (new) And now... PANEL We now shift the camera into Sarya's room, facing the door. However, we are close enough that we can't see anything but the door--and of course Shenya's evil silhouette (because it's brighter outside than inside). SHENYA If I hear __one more word__-- PANEL Zoom out. We see that Sarya is already in bed. She is on her back, fingers interlaced on her chest, eyes closed. Classic relaxed sleep pose. Shenya is perplexed.